Fourteenth Day of Editing: Second focus group

After making the first lot of changes to mine and Sophie's rough cut, I now showed it to another person to get another perspective and a second lot of opinions/views as this will help us improve our OTS to a standard that is satisfying. After this viewing I handed a feedback sheet to Carl (the person in the picture below watching out OTS) so that he could fill out and answer the questions we needed answers to and that we felt were the main areas that we were a bit weary about. I have also asked other people to watch mine and Sophie's OTS so that they could fill out our feedback sheets as well, the more feedback the better. Sophie has also done this.

Carl watching Silent Temptation, our opening scene.

The replies and improvements people suggested are in my next post about the feedback sheets.